tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.comments2023-07-02T01:18:22.626-07:00The WriteRunnerAndrew Rosenberghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comBlogger1733125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-49019376805529801952013-07-26T20:19:11.916-07:002013-07-26T20:19:11.916-07:00I found a list of criminals that has been monitori...I found a list of criminals that has been monitoring bank accounts and internet business, they stalk and spy on all your computer activities ACAH 567, BJLJ 156, AYHK 771, BCCS 666, 4V 6026, 4V 6025, 88KP, 88KB, 88KL, 88KY, 050 EPM, 5S, M5S, BPHC 380,BEKX 968, BNWN 970, ALFP697, BKDS 839, BKBM571, BAJW 833, AYAR944, BLCN475, 1-901-821-0799, 416-710-0485, BRMY 528, BLAZ 333, 416-520-5886, 416-456-9100,647-284-3203, 905-471-6526, aany 313, 680 vaz, ALFE 785, BDNN 223, BFTR 243, AZCA 349, 915 RANAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-87420378406626157202012-12-16T07:53:30.693-08:002012-12-16T07:53:30.693-08:00Yeah, I've been off blogging for a while.
I su...Yeah, I've been off blogging for a while.<br />I submitted it but I haven't heard anything. I probably need to send a query to see what the status is.<br />Steam Palace is a long story. Most of the agents/editors I talked to wanted it shorter, but after I did that, I didn't like the piece that much anymore. It's on hold for now. I have a different ms I'm getting ready to send out after a few more revisions.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-29468596937339851682012-12-14T21:08:51.289-08:002012-12-14T21:08:51.289-08:00So, I'm trying to catch up on this blogging th...So, I'm trying to catch up on this blogging thing, and I probably haven't read anything in the last year. I really like what I saw of the pitch, and I'd like to see the query letter, and since this was posted in July I'd like to know where it's gone from there. <br /><br />And Steam Palace, I'm too lazy to dig through the old posts, and I was just wondering what happened with that. If you had any luck with it?Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-65219085316518408162012-07-23T20:20:45.987-07:002012-07-23T20:20:45.987-07:00I'll probably be putting a query letter up in ...I'll probably be putting a query letter up in the next few weeks.<br />Archie lost his father in the wreck that incapacitated his mom. All he wants to do is break free of her care, until he realizes that there's something more important at stake--bringing his father's killer to justice.<br />Hmm...may need to use that in the query letter.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-88560200286331049612012-07-23T19:36:03.260-07:002012-07-23T19:36:03.260-07:00I'm definitely intrigued by the term "dea...I'm definitely intrigued by the term "dead air." You're using it in a way quite different from my understanding of it, and that hooked me right away. I want to know more about Archie's story. Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-50489409210119098432012-06-18T11:18:20.885-07:002012-06-18T11:18:20.885-07:00Good post about interjections.
http://www.studycha...Good post about interjections.<br />http://www.studychamps.com/Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-51497288142159113522012-03-18T10:37:33.007-07:002012-03-18T10:37:33.007-07:00That's really about it. Wish I had more.That's really about it. Wish I had more.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-17448296742561051342012-03-18T10:37:05.034-07:002012-03-18T10:37:05.034-07:00Or unnatural. :)Or unnatural. :)Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-4424745599358530702012-03-18T10:36:42.238-07:002012-03-18T10:36:42.238-07:00You never know how it's going to end...You never know how it's going to end...Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-16683616557477575432012-03-08T00:57:08.880-08:002012-03-08T00:57:08.880-08:00You kept something from when you were in the fourt...You kept something from when you were in the fourth grade? I am impressed. Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-24856371602391058402012-02-03T12:29:34.071-08:002012-02-03T12:29:34.071-08:00Love the meteorite shower! All good stories should...Love the meteorite shower! All good stories should have some sort of natural disaster in my humble opinion. :)Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-79163211941648855512012-01-09T09:52:41.948-08:002012-01-09T09:52:41.948-08:00What suspense. Just when I thought it was over, Su...What suspense. Just when I thought it was over, Sue was in danger, lol...<br /><br />You did a good job for 10 years old.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-52269292673282953702012-01-08T18:35:15.977-08:002012-01-08T18:35:15.977-08:00The rest is going up tomorrow!The rest is going up tomorrow!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-35919903817261925192012-01-08T18:34:48.937-08:002012-01-08T18:34:48.937-08:00I do have my first "real" novel I wrote ...I do have my first "real" novel I wrote in 1985 around. I think I once rewrote a scene from it for a Blogfest.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-7985399220241999592012-01-08T17:31:00.893-08:002012-01-08T17:31:00.893-08:00This was fabulous! I wish I could find my first at...This was fabulous! I wish I could find my first attempt at writing a novel (I think it was 6th grade - historical romance featuring me and the dude from a-ha).<br />Thanks for sharing. I love that you critiqued yourself. lolAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-79270114649486825852012-01-08T12:17:51.047-08:002012-01-08T12:17:51.047-08:00Oh my goodness, this is awesome, if hilarious! Wil...Oh my goodness, this is awesome, if hilarious! Will be coming back for more.<br /><br />I wish I could find some of my earlier works. :)Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-16844024785599986632011-11-12T13:46:38.595-08:002011-11-12T13:46:38.595-08:00Hi Mino.
Thanks for the link.
Indeed, the Inciting...Hi Mino.<br />Thanks for the link.<br />Indeed, the Inciting Incident can occur outside the Call to Adventure.<br />Also note there can be several instances of each. Each Inciting Incident raises the stakes, each Call to Adventure is another promise that the Hero might find resolution through exploration.<br />In this series I'm just going for broad strokes.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-66468045417294565452011-11-11T12:43:34.627-08:002011-11-11T12:43:34.627-08:00There's a difference between Inciting Incident...There's a difference between Inciting Incident and Call to Adventure: http://www.clickok.co.uk/issues.html#IncitingIncidentCallToAdventureAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-8286439418229058102011-11-02T13:12:02.117-07:002011-11-02T13:12:02.117-07:00Thanks... I copied this out to keep me going.Thanks... I copied this out to keep me going.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-67389490462394504732011-11-01T22:36:22.805-07:002011-11-01T22:36:22.805-07:00I also feel lost in the jungle and it's just t...I also feel lost in the jungle and it's just the first day.Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-66029918568438352692011-11-01T10:14:37.746-07:002011-11-01T10:14:37.746-07:00I'm picking up the piece I shredded into exist...I'm picking up the piece I shredded into existence back in September. I let it sit through October, did other stuffages, and now that November is here, I'm picking it up and getting onto the second showing. Let's see, I got 38kw in September. If I get to hacking, no problem getting 50kw in November!<br /><br />You're right about the disgruntled look of a writer-in-progress. It is a different beast to be slashing and hacking your way through the jungles of a rough draft, onward ho and trail be damned!<br /><br />Good luck, bro.<br /><br /><br /> - EricAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-51251780238832320072011-10-31T22:54:40.719-07:002011-10-31T22:54:40.719-07:00I come out of the wordwork every so often. This wi...I come out of the wordwork every so often. This will probably be the hardest NaNo yet. My idea is lame and undeveloped, and I'm working a job now.<br />So just some throwaway writing I guessAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-68389361456992206842011-10-31T22:13:30.863-07:002011-10-31T22:13:30.863-07:00Hey Ho Andrew; nice to see you surfacing again :)
...Hey Ho Andrew; nice to see you surfacing again :)<br /><br />LOL, this sounds like a horror story; no wonder it starts the day after Halloween. I wish you much luck my friend. I will not be torturing myself thus - I'm not dedicated enough to my writing - but I empathize with everyone who takes up the challenge. I know in the past you've had excellent projects come about because of NaNo.<br /><br />Go forth and be brave, dear writer :)<br /><br />........dholeAndrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-77970978905387315802011-10-10T07:33:01.310-07:002011-10-10T07:33:01.310-07:00Andrew, congratulations on your new job. You can d...Andrew, congratulations on your new job. You can do it, you can still write! It doesn't need to screech to a halt--make time to write. I have 4 kids that keep me SO busy along with a husband who likes my time spent with him too. I've managed to write 9 novels in between down times! I was working full time the first 5 or 6 years of our marriage and I still found time to write!<br /><br />Good luck...<br /><br /><a href="http://elizabethmueller.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">♥.•*¨Elizabeth¨*•.♥</a><br>Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1111229284977476511.post-71767856407276962722011-09-19T07:22:33.625-07:002011-09-19T07:22:33.625-07:00Definitely sleepy. Need to catch a 7:30 bus!Definitely sleepy. Need to catch a 7:30 bus!Andrew Rosenberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09215333688753781447noreply@blogger.com